Good copywriting is a superpower.

Amazon, the second most valuable brand in the world, puts an emphasis on teaching its employees how to write.

They know good copy equates to more customers.

These are the 8 tips to write like an Amazonian 🧵

1. Keep Your Sentences Under 30 Words.

I'd keep them under 15 words.

They should be Kevin Hart short.

And only focus on one idea.

Short sentences help break down info into bite-size pieces.

This makes the communication smoother.

Digestible info = Retained info
2. Replace Adjectives With Data

In 1880, Mark Twain said, “When you catch an adjective, kill it."

In Amazon's case, don’t kill them -- replace them with data.

Why?

Because numbers are eye candy.

It organizes info into a logical order.
3. Eliminate Weasel Words

Weasel words kill sentences.

They're vague. Boring.

If you’re going to use adjectives -- use descriptive adjectives.

NOT interpretive adjectives.

Ex:

Interpretive - We went on a long boat ride.

Descriptive - We went on a 5-hour boat ride.
4. The “So What” Test

Re-read your writing and ask, “so what?”

Can the reader understand the sentence, paragraph, or page?

Does it make sense?

Does it provide value?

Are they learning?

This helps give you an understanding from the consumer's perspective.
5. . Be Objective

Subjective writing lacks facts and data.

They’re supported by points of view and observations.

Wrong: I think Amazon members are happy with 2-day shipping.

Right: We increased customer satisfaction by 95% with the addition of free 2-day shipping.
6. Avoid Jargon and Acronyms

Use an acronym or jargon a new customer doesn’t understand and you’ll lose them.

Your attempt to sound smart wasn't smart.

Wrong: Amazon’s “CAC” was reduced by 5% in Q2.

Right: Amazon reduced their “customer acquisitions costs” by 5% in Q2.
7. Use Subject-Verb-Object Sentences

Use this sentence structure to be clear.

- Who/what are you writing about.

- What did they do.

- What was acted on.

For ex:

An Amazon Prime Member wrote a 5-star review.

Subject: Amazon Prime Member

Verb: Wrote

Object: Review
8. Avoid "Clutter" Words and Phrases

Respect a consumer's time.

Cut the overused phrases and obsess with clarity.

Concise words = concise decisions.
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TL;DR

1. Short sentences (30 words or less. Even try for 15)
2. Replace Adjectives with data
3. No Weasel Words
4. Use the "So What" test
5. Be Objective
6. Avoid jargon and acronyms
7. Use Subject-Verb-Object Sentences

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big louis winthorpe III energy


i almost feel bad for the guy, because someone this absolutely clueless about how he sounds really shouldn't be allowed to post under his own name.

he seems like someone who *genuinely* means well most of the time, but it extremely easy to excite and wind up, and who is just profoundly dense about the wisdom of getting wound up the way he does in public.

on the other hand, the tara reade business was indefensible, exploitative, and gross. if there is ever a writer who desperately needs an editor to save him from himself, it's nathan robinson.

i had a few friends in high school who were well-meaning, wealthier than they realized, and in drama class, and most of them grew out of their nathan robinson stage because, well, it was oklahoma. there's almost something a little charming about the fact that he didn't.

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