I'd keep them under 15 words.
They should be Kevin Hart short.
And only focus on one idea.
Short sentences help break down info into bite-size pieces.
This makes the communication smoother.
Digestible info = Retained info
Good copywriting is a superpower.
Amazon, the second most valuable brand in the world, puts an emphasis on teaching its employees how to write.
They know good copy equates to more customers.
These are the 8 tips to write like an Amazonian 🧵
I'd keep them under 15 words.
They should be Kevin Hart short.
And only focus on one idea.
Short sentences help break down info into bite-size pieces.
This makes the communication smoother.
Digestible info = Retained info
In 1880, Mark Twain said, “When you catch an adjective, kill it."
In Amazon's case, don’t kill them -- replace them with data.
Why?
Because numbers are eye candy.
It organizes info into a logical order.
Weasel words kill sentences.
They're vague. Boring.
If you’re going to use adjectives -- use descriptive adjectives.
NOT interpretive adjectives.
Ex:
Interpretive - We went on a long boat ride.
Descriptive - We went on a 5-hour boat ride.
Re-read your writing and ask, “so what?”
Can the reader understand the sentence, paragraph, or page?
Does it make sense?
Does it provide value?
Are they learning?
This helps give you an understanding from the consumer's perspective.
Subjective writing lacks facts and data.
They’re supported by points of view and observations.
Wrong: I think Amazon members are happy with 2-day shipping.
Right: We increased customer satisfaction by 95% with the addition of free 2-day shipping.
Use an acronym or jargon a new customer doesn’t understand and you’ll lose them.
Your attempt to sound smart wasn't smart.
Wrong: Amazon’s “CAC” was reduced by 5% in Q2.
Right: Amazon reduced their “customer acquisitions costs” by 5% in Q2.
Use this sentence structure to be clear.
- Who/what are you writing about.
- What did they do.
- What was acted on.
For ex:
An Amazon Prime Member wrote a 5-star review.
Subject: Amazon Prime Member
Verb: Wrote
Object: Review
Respect a consumer's time.
Cut the overused phrases and obsess with clarity.
Concise words = concise decisions.
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The emergence of many new hypocrisies typically heralds an emerging new cultural synthesis.
Are you disturbed that you agree with one of those viewpoints? Or perhaps that other people you respect do?
1/x
Let me offer a framework for thinking about things like this, something called an “Omega Event.”
It was first described to me by Erik Martin, one of Reddit's first community managers:
In governance, Omega Events exist due to the fact that no system of beliefs, no worldview, no set of rules, can account for everything that will ever happen.
Eventually someone (or some group) will do something that lies outside the scope of all existing rules, and you will have to make decisions again from first principles.
Sometimes the Omega Event emerges from the confluence of many unrelated factors. When it does, it is wholly different from anything you’ve encountered.
Are you disturbed that you agree with one of those viewpoints? Or perhaps that other people you respect do?
1/x
\u2014 HYPOCRISY \u2014
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\U0001f4cdFree market conservatives outraged that a private social media company can decide who has access to its service.
\U0001f4cdSo called liberals overjoyed at the prospect of powerful corporations taking control of the content and information we're allowed to see.
Let me offer a framework for thinking about things like this, something called an “Omega Event.”
It was first described to me by Erik Martin, one of Reddit's first community managers:
In governance, Omega Events exist due to the fact that no system of beliefs, no worldview, no set of rules, can account for everything that will ever happen.
Eventually someone (or some group) will do something that lies outside the scope of all existing rules, and you will have to make decisions again from first principles.
Sometimes the Omega Event emerges from the confluence of many unrelated factors. When it does, it is wholly different from anything you’ve encountered.
How to destroy your competition with Cold Email
Want numbers like this?
I am going to show you exactly how to GUARANTEE your cold emails will convert.
// THREAD //
First, I am going to show you the structure of a killer cold email.
---
{{Quick Question about Company_Name}} <-- Subject line
Hey {{Name}}, [[first line}} <-- individual personalization is key
We just helped ___, a business like yours, do x in y days <-- Case study
I'm 100% certain we can do something similar for you.
Do you have time for a call this week? <-- CTA
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Let's break this down.
Our main goal is to not sound automated. (even though it was in a way)
How do we do that?
Highly Personalized First Lines.
We have their:
- Company Name
- First Name
- LinkedIn Profile
I use https://t.co/cotgiyqqLE to scrape this. (not aff)
The better the first line, the better the cold email will convert.
We need 10/10 first lines.
A good offer + a bad first line = 60% open & 8% reply rate
A good offer + a 10/10 first line = 80% open & 20% reply rate
Run the numbers.
Want numbers like this?
I am going to show you exactly how to GUARANTEE your cold emails will convert.
// THREAD //
First, I am going to show you the structure of a killer cold email.
---
{{Quick Question about Company_Name}} <-- Subject line
Hey {{Name}}, [[first line}} <-- individual personalization is key
We just helped ___, a business like yours, do x in y days <-- Case study
I'm 100% certain we can do something similar for you.
Do you have time for a call this week? <-- CTA
--------
Let's break this down.
Our main goal is to not sound automated. (even though it was in a way)
How do we do that?
Highly Personalized First Lines.
We have their:
- Company Name
- First Name
- LinkedIn Profile
I use https://t.co/cotgiyqqLE to scrape this. (not aff)
The better the first line, the better the cold email will convert.
We need 10/10 first lines.
A good offer + a bad first line = 60% open & 8% reply rate
A good offer + a 10/10 first line = 80% open & 20% reply rate
Run the numbers.
Reading this article, the story sounds pretty wild. But I spent a weird amount of time with Martin Shkreli, and I’m not surprised the journalist fell in love w him
A few years back my team built an app called Blab. It was like clubhouse before clubhouse.
When he first joined the app I had no idea who he was. I just saw that his live streams instantly had 3-4K viewers. More than anyone on our tiny platform.
I googled him and it came up: “Martin Shkreli, most hated man in America”
I assumed he was bad news
And he was... but also he wasn’t.
He was a douchebag, but he was in on the joke. He was a dick, but he was also very entertaining.
In the mornings he would live stream himself analyzing stocks or walking through drug discovery pathways.
In the afternoon he’d let people call in and debate him live on air. A CNN reporter tried to get him to go on TV, he refused, and said debate me here on Blab, no edits, no tv time limits.
At night he’d host late night convos - and eventually fall asleep on cam
The guy was a pain in the ass but man he drove traffic.
We had big celebs like Tony Robbins, the Jonas brothers etc... he outperformed them all.
At one point he was bringing in 100k users per month directly to his channel. And Bc he was so entertaining, they stuck.
A few years back my team built an app called Blab. It was like clubhouse before clubhouse.
Christie Smythe covered white-collar crime for Bloomberg News and lived "the perfect little Brooklyn life" with her husband. Then she threw it all away for one of her sources: infamous pharma bro Martin Shkreli. https://t.co/Xk0zXmYkgF
— ELLE Magazine (US) (@ELLEmagazine) December 20, 2020
When he first joined the app I had no idea who he was. I just saw that his live streams instantly had 3-4K viewers. More than anyone on our tiny platform.
I googled him and it came up: “Martin Shkreli, most hated man in America”
I assumed he was bad news
And he was... but also he wasn’t.
He was a douchebag, but he was in on the joke. He was a dick, but he was also very entertaining.
In the mornings he would live stream himself analyzing stocks or walking through drug discovery pathways.
In the afternoon he’d let people call in and debate him live on air. A CNN reporter tried to get him to go on TV, he refused, and said debate me here on Blab, no edits, no tv time limits.
At night he’d host late night convos - and eventually fall asleep on cam
The guy was a pain in the ass but man he drove traffic.
We had big celebs like Tony Robbins, the Jonas brothers etc... he outperformed them all.
At one point he was bringing in 100k users per month directly to his channel. And Bc he was so entertaining, they stuck.
