MEGA THREAD🧵: 15 Headline Writing Tips With Real Examples

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Invoke Your Reader's Imagination With Specifics.

Never choose many vague words when a few specific ones will do the job much better.
2/ Cut The Corporate "Gobbly Goop"

A thesaurus gets you an MBA. But simple words are “the grease” allowing the best headlines to go far.
3/ Write To The Crocodile Brain 🐊🧠

Big numbers, dense facts and difficult words are hard for the brain to process.

Seek out ways to turn tough concepts into REAL visual concepts that get the attention of the crocodile brain.
4/ Turn The Energy Up!

If you can imagine someone reading your headline and then promptly falling asleep, it's probably time for a rewrite.
5/ Never Convince. Use Curiosity To Pull Them In.

Nobody likes to be sold. But everyone loves a little intrigue.
6/ Say What Your Audience Is Thinking, But Is Afraid To Voice Aloud

Your audience is wondering how you stack up. So don’t be afraid to tell them the truth.
7/ Write Like People Speak

What would a friend say over cocktails? The more you can make your copy sound like a REAL person spoke it, the better it will perform.
8/ Make It Clear You Can Solve Your Customers' Problems.

Never trade cleverness for clarity.
9/ Mitigate The Risk Of Making The Wrong Choice

Nobody likes to feel like a fool. Everyone loves the comfort of a good return policy.
10/ Write About The Ways Your Product Is *Actually* Used

Position your product as the perfect solution to people’s problems by talking about specific use cases instead of vague ideas.
11/ Don't Expect A Feature To Carry Your Conversions

Never rely on your features to do EVERYTHING for you.
12/ The Most Powerful Word In Marketing Is Free

Free samples. Free trials. Free downloads. Free quizzes. There’s a reason these phrases are tied to some of the biggest companies in history.

Free turns heads and earns the click.
13/ Deliver One Message ... Or Deliver None!

Optimize around one goal, one message, and one action.
14/ Don’t Talk AT Your Audience. Talk TO Them.

The more you can talk TO your customers, the better your copy will do.
15/ Don't Stuff Your Copy With Technical Terms. Stuff It With Benefits.

Your customers don’t care about the technical names you use. They care about what your product does for them.
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2/ First, “X” could be lots of things. Examples: What would need to be true for you to

- “Feel it's in our best interest for me to be CMO"
- “Feel that we’re in a good place as a company”
- “Feel that we’re on the same page”
- “Feel that we both got what we wanted from this deal

3/ Normally, we aren’t that direct. Example from startup/VC land:

Founders leave VC meetings thinking that every VC will invest, but they rarely do.

Worse over, the founders don’t know what they need to do in order to be fundable.

4/ So why should you ask the magic Q?

To get clarity.

You want to know where you stand, and what it takes to get what you want in a way that also gets them what they want.

It also holds them (mentally) accountable once the thing they need becomes true.

5/ Staying in the context of soliciting investors, the question is “what would need to be true for you to want to invest (or partner with us on this journey, etc)?”

Multiple responses to this question are likely to deliver a positive result.
दधीचि ऋषि को मनाही थी कि वह अश्विनी कुमारों को किसी भी अवस्था में ब्रह्मविद्या का उपदेश नहीं दें। ये आदेश देवराज इन्द्र का था।वह नहीं चाहते थे कि उनके सिंहासन को प्रत्यक्ष या परोक्ष रुप से कोई भी खतरा हो।मगर जब अश्विनी कुमारों ने सहृदय प्रार्थना की तो महर्षि सहर्ष मान गए।


और उन्होनें ब्रह्मविद्या का ज्ञान अश्विनि कुमारों को दे दिया। गुप्तचरों के माध्यम से जब खबर इन्द्रदेव तक पहुंची तो वे क्रोध में खड़ग ले कर गए और महर्षि दधीचि का सर धड़ से अलग कर दिया।मगर अश्विनी कुमार भी कहां चुप बैठने वाले थे।उन्होने तुरंत एक अश्व का सिर महर्षि के धड़ पे...


...प्रत्यारोपित कर उन्हें जीवित रख लिया।उस दिन के पश्चात महर्षि दधीचि अश्वशिरा भी कहलाए जाने लगे।अब आगे सुनिये की किस प्रकार महर्षि दधीचि का सर काटने वाले इन्द्र कैसे अपनी रक्षा हेतु उनके आगे गिड़गिड़ाए ।

एक बार देवराज इन्द्र अपनी सभा में बैठे थे, तो उन्हे खुद पर अभिमान हो आया।


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अभिमान के कारण ऋषि बृहस्पति के पधारने पर न तो इन्द्र ही खड़े हुए और न ही अन्य देवों को खड़े होने दिया।देवगुरु बृहस्पति इन्द्र का ये कठोर दुर्व्यवहार देख कर चुप चाप वहां से लौट गए।कुछ देर पश्चात जब देवराज का मद उतरा तो उन्हे अपनी गलती का एहसास हुआ।